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Re: The Seperation 1/2 of chap 1
Hello Randomer! Okay, this was very good. There were barely any grammatical errors. I like some of the characters, while others don't make as much sense to me. Here are ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.3 (review!)
Thank you KD! I can always rely on you for a truthful review. I'll work on it immediately! More reviews are welcome and needed! Esther Sylvester
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Crashing and Falling [Chapter 1]
Hello RedRaven! Before I get to review I would just like to say a few things. First off, welcome to the site! I'm sure you'll find everyone friendly and willing ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Unknown Incidence (3)
Hey, this is Esther Sylvester! I haven't read the chapters before this, and something tells me I should, but I liked it quite a bit. I seriously enjoyed the spontaneous ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: The Assassin's Redemption Chapter 1 - Rewritten Once More!
Hey there! This is Esther Sylvester here to review you piece. This was great! First I was a little cautious because I was afraid it would be really, really cheesy, ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.3 (review!)
This is the third chapter to my romance novel, The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever.Please enjoy and reviews are needed! -Esther Sylvester Chapter 3 ______________________ The carriage that was car
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Liar
Pretty good! Interesting development and characters. It flowed nicely and was pretty good! Here is a little thing that wasn't perfect though. If every time a lie fell out of ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: because we can- (UR)
Hey comrie! It's Esther Sylvester here! Once again, another good piece. I can always rely on you to write something solid, C. It flowed very nicely, never getting to detailed ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 2
Thank you! That means a lot!
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: New feller.
Hey Rovert! You mind if I call you that? I'm Esther and it is a pleasure to welcome you to this site. It's pretty cool once you get used to ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Bored Princess
Ooh, very pretty indeed! Her facial expression is fantastic. And the dress is very well drawn. I kind of wish that the fist that she is leaning on had more ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 2
Cool, thanks guys! I've went through and revised most of it and I must say it looks a lot better thanks to you. And to KD, I say darn it ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Hurting ~ Small section
Hey SameOld. I'm Esther Sylvester and I will be reviewing your piece. Good job, I really must say. I feel the intense relationship between the two characters. I think I ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: -Deleted-
Hi there! Okay, this was good but very, very short. In fact, it was so short that I got really no sense of what was going on. I liked the ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Life
Hey LoLo, I shall be reviewing you today. Compelling! It was very attention grabbing. I don't know much about the characters yet though. Do you plan on writing another chapter, ...
Apr 8, 2010
